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i’d love to know what it feels like to break you.
or even hurt you in the way you did me.
you seem pretty strong, yet inside you’re probably not.
i just want to break you.

i’d love to see you cry your heart out.
over some girl who doesn’t want you.
you’re not that grand, so i hope you face this.
i just want to break you.

i’d love to see you so unsettled that you have no idea where you’re going,
so unsettled that you’re almost lost, but not quite.
and to find yourself and get back on track is almost unreachable.
i just want to break you.

i’d love to watch you suffer.
for you to see what it’s like to be in these shoes.
see if you would survive.
i just want to break you.

i’d love to watch you fall.
i’d love to see you lose it all.
i’d love to break you.
i just want to break you.
©2007-2009 ~misspetiteelyse
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he broke me,
i break him.

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:iconmis0angel:
nicely done

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:iconamariec:
Woah. :wow: That is a deep piece right there. The title caught me, I had to read it.

This is good, kind of the exact opposite of "Do unto others as you would have them do unto you."

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:iconloveislost1987:
Wow, I'm not usually a fan of Spoken word, but this piece is wonderful. full of power, determination, strength and plain old guts.

:+fav: 9/10

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:iconmisspetiteelyse:
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aww. thanksssss (L)

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